Not to put a damper on things, but you tend to leave out words quite frequently and misspell a few things. The story is great, don't get me wrong, but I figured I'd let you know that you might want to proofread a little bit more. It takes me out of the story when I have to mentally add a missing word.
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Re: F!Courier/Dean Domino - A Heist - 5c
Date: 2013-03-25 01:02 am (UTC)