LOVE!!!! Charon is so tall and gruff that I love getting to see him be a little dominant in the bedroom. It just fits.
Glad you decided to write! I would gladly pay you 7.50 an hour to write fanfiction, especially if it gets "good"! ;) Ahh, I do love some Charon romance. Who am I kidding? SMUT!!!
OK, actual comments: I like the idea that Charon was never meant to be brain washed for 200 years. It would make sense that it might begin to wear off, while some aspects seem to remain the same. Maybe following commands was so hardwired, that it would be the last to go, if it ever did. I like the guilt (he's such a broody Batman) and the new feelings of pride. I wondered if Elle getting naked was for his benefit. Men are sometimes oblivious to flirting even when we're being obvious. ;)
RE: Re: Heavy In Your Arms - Part 1b/?
Glad you decided to write! I would gladly pay you 7.50 an hour to write fanfiction, especially if it gets "good"! ;) Ahh, I do love some Charon romance. Who am I kidding? SMUT!!!
OK, actual comments: I like the idea that Charon was never meant to be brain washed for 200 years. It would make sense that it might begin to wear off, while some aspects seem to remain the same. Maybe following commands was so hardwired, that it would be the last to go, if it ever did. I like the guilt (he's such a broody Batman) and the new feelings of pride.
I wondered if Elle getting naked was for his benefit. Men are sometimes oblivious to flirting even when we're being obvious. ;)
Can't wait for more! Keep it up!