Really glad I read this - I usually steer clear of the porny fills.
Can I just say I find the way you've written Boone's voice to be... refreshing? It sounds as if you're writing him post 'I Forgot to Remember to Forget' which doesn't happen often at all on this meme. idk I just care about Boone a lot and it's nice to see him getting on with his life, and that being reflected in his voice in your writing.
I like to see Boone written as a human being, I guess, with needs (even if it is the need to strangle himself for kicks).